a surprising twist

Writhing in silent agony, small beads of sweat forming on my brow. Battling to breathe. Each breath, no matter how small burns. The heat feels like it is creating a hole, a hole burning in my chest. Any movement, just moving my hands hurts. I can’t continue. Help me, save me, someone please!

Gawd damned heartburn – I really must learn to stay away from those tomatoes…


Tell us a story — fiction or non-fiction — with a twist we can’t see coming.

Photographers, artists, poets: show us SURPRISE.


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